Describing The Scene DRAFT - By Tiare

Describing The Scene

• At a farm
• Surrounded by long grass
• Winter morning
• Girls gossiping
• Hiding by the trees
• The clothes are from a while ago
• Girls and Boys
• Terrified
• Corrugated Iron
• Running away from something or someone

DRAFT - Of 9 Sentences

One winter morning, both of the boys and girls were playing with each other like every morning until they saw a figure trying to hide. They started running away with a terrified look on their faces. As they were running they came past a little hut made out of corrugated iron. Once they saw no sign of the figure they went to hide behind the trees that were right in front of their eyes. As soon as they made it some of the girls started chattering to each other until they heard a most unusual sound. It sounded like a person that desperately needed help. They heard it again so they went to check it out. They had a look but it was just a speaker trying to get their attention. They started laughing.

Here is my DRAFT of 9 Sentences. It tells you a story about kids they were visited by a stranger. I have bullet point on the top because that was my brain storm or thinking.